Commons:Photography critiques/January 2009

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Shipwreck on Ocean Beach

Shipwreck on Ocean Beach

The image is not clear, but it is because of the low fog. IMO this fog kind of adds some interesting atmosphere to the image.The only post processing I've done was to crop the image.--Mbz1 (talk) 18:16, 13 January 2009 (UTC)

 Comment uninteresting foreground. Could you crop it 4/5th on the bottom, the top and on the left side? --SvonHalenbach (talk) 15:35, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

Dunvegan Castle

Dunvegan Castle

With the castle towering above the morning mist, I wonder whether cropping at the bottom and/or the left right might be sensible. -- Klaus with K (talk) 09:13, 7 January 2009 (UTC)

  • Don't you have a version with more space above? The composition is unbalanced like it is. Anyway if a crop is needed it would be at right(and bottom?), not at left. -- Alvesgaspar (talk) 20:44, 7 January 2009 (UTC)
without crop
  • This is all the image data available. Oops, I meant to crop at the right, to get the castle off-centre. But with sky area lacking top left I'd need to fudge some sky to get more space above the castle. -- Klaus with K (talk) 11:00, 8 January 2009 (UTC)
new crop
  • Voilà, here is some more sky above. Did I take away too much at the right? At the bottom I think I want to keep the water structure linking the ditch and the open water. -- Klaus with K (talk) 11:28, 8 January 2009 (UTC)