Hi Cvmontuy, some quick thoughts: Focus is right on the eyes – well done! But the lighting situation could be improved in my opinion: It looks like she's sitting below a lamp hanging from the ceiling. Most of the hair on the top of her head is overexposed, you've lost quite a bit of detail there. On the other hand, the area around her mouth and especially the lower parts of her nose are pretty dark. Maybe try to find a spot with more even/less direct light, or add a second light source from the side. The bright pillow in the background is a bit distracting for me. Otherwise a charming portrait, I like the upright ears and the slightly tilted head: looks like she's paying close attention to what you're doing with that black box in front of your face ;-) --El Grafo (talk) 08:13, 26 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
