File talk:General Problems of Communication over a Shared Medium.ogv
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tasks for a new version
[edit]content issues
[edit]- The metaphor of voltage changing from blue to red when data is corrupted is somewhat misleading. Either there is voltage or there is none (or something in between, but no different color). Voltage could be increased or decreased.
Steffen --SteffenStaab (talk) 10:20, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
- -> voltage color at 1:32, 1:47, 2:48 and send data by B --Rob-nowman (talk) 12:01, 14 February 2014 (UTC)
technical issues
[edit]- animation sticks often. an export or an .ogv problem? the original file is smooth an other .webm files are also OK.
- new Videomaterial would be great (check background lighting voice etc. (is this a "nice to have"?) --Rob-nowman (talk) 10:28, 22 January 2014 (UTC)
trivial corrections for next version
[edit]- it should read "Who sent the data?" (twice), because "sent" is past tense and "send" is present tense
- "Voltage time" should rather be "Duration of increased voltage"
- correct spelling: simultaneous and simultaneously
- Why are the moving fonts sometimes blurred?
- Consistent use of lower and upper capitals within phrases
- "corrupt data" should become "corrupted data"
--SteffenStaab (talk) 10:05, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
- at 0:19: make better arrows --Rob-nowman (talk) 12:01, 14 February 2014 (UTC)