Commons:Featured picture candidates/Image:Schema Grenade-i18n.svg

Image:Schema Grenade-i18n.svg, featured

•  Info a SVG cutaway view of the plug of a grenade
•  Info created, uploaded and nominated by walké 17:28, 22 October 2007 (UTC) --~~
•  Support --walké 17:28, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Comment Looks good, but before I vote a few small comments. (1) I would prefer full line labelling. (2) Maybe a bit more space around the two-figure numbers. (3) Why not also sectioning the bolt? It is a bit weird that that is the only part which has a 3D look.
  For the rest: well done. Lycaon 17:42, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Comment( 1) full line labelling ? (sorry i'm french) (2) Good idea ! (3) The schema is a vectorial version of this. It was a request of the french workshop graph. I think it helps understanding. For the rest : thanks ;-). walké 18:00, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

• Full line labelling = les pointillés rouges foncés pour les annotations would probably look better as full lines, but it is not a conditio sine qua non. And I've looked at the request of the French graphics workshop, but there no explanation is given why the bolt has to be in 3D. Oh yes, BTW, you don't have to be sorry that you are French ;-)). Lycaon 18:20, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

• With full lines it's to heavy (¿) see here. For the 3d : the bolt was in 3d in the manually technical sketch, so i make it. walké 18:35, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

•  Support --Beyond silence 20:10, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support SRauz 22:35, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support Interesting, informative, clear. --JaGa 03:32, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support I would still prefer full but thinner labelling lines, but the drawing itself is excellent. Lycaon 08:10, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Oppose for now. The illustration is so good that definitely deserves a better labelling. The lines should be a little longer and full, like Lycaon suggests. Also, the circles are too small for such big numbers (or the other way around...). Alvesgaspar 08:35, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
  •  Support - Ahh... this is a different thing! - Alvesgaspar 13:53, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support Nice scheme. La largeur gagnerait à être augmentée, ce qui permettrait d'aérer les numéros. Et rien n'empêche de mettre des numéros au dessus et en dessous de l'image, plutôt que d'avoir tout sur deux côtés. The circles should have the same diameter. Sémhur 08:50, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Info So I improved lines, and extended circles ... It's ok ? walké 12:28, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support KABOOM ! --Richard Bartz 15:04, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support --Sting 16:36, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support --Karelj 20:00, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Neutral because of the less than optimal labelling. The reason it looks so heavy is the use of circles round the numbers (these would never be allowed in professional patent drawings). Get rid of the circles, use thinner but non-dotted leadlines and this would be perfect. The drawing itself is excellent. --MichaelMaggs 06:25, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support with good labelling now. --MichaelMaggs 16:01, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Comment - Agree with MichaelMaggs, the circles are ruining the labelling. Also, as I said above, full lines should be used (but thin lines, not the ones shown in your example) - Alvesgaspar 11:26, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
  • It's ok ! Here is. walké 13:20, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
    • Thanks for that. I've changed to support.--MichaelMaggs 16:01, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support Clear and informative image. Very well done. Arria Belli | parlami 18:35, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support Vive l'atelier graphique, bravo Walké. le Korrigan →bla 10:07, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support Beau boulot. Bravo. --Pinpin 14:13, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support - Net, clair : parfait ! Yug (talk) 09:03, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
•  Support Travail époustouflant qui mérite d'être récompensé! Je ne regrette qu'une seule petite chose: le style graphique contrasté de la mèche par rapport au reste de la grenade Karta24 20:44, 29 October 2007 (UTC)

• ... je suis aussi de ton avis mais hélàs faire une jolie mèche en svg n'est absolument pas de mon niveau. J'ai donc pris une photo de ficelle, tenté et intérgé. Si tu peut faire mieux j'en serais ravi  ! -- Walké 21:16, 29 October 2007 (UTC)

•  Support Merlijn 11:27, 31 October 2007 (UTC)

result: 17 support, 0 oppose, 0 neutral => featured. Cecil 05:33, 2 November 2007 (UTC)